It is far too early in the morning. It is spring break still. It snowed.
Jeremy just picked me up from work. I ran the DocuTech all night and then inserted a bunch of annoying books into binders. I got to listen to The Beatles and some Mustard Plug so the night wasn't a complete loss to me.
Today I seek adventure, for soon Jeremy and I will head to the mall. What fun!
Yesterday Darlene and I hit Grand Rapids. We went Car shopping and what not. She may buy a Neon. I don't think so though. I think she should buy the Mercury Tracer we looked at.We had fun running around but she was late for work. We had my car towed. That's not fun at all. It was kind of depressing but I won't let it get to me. I'll get a new car soon or have that one fixed.
I got a little bit of my script done. I'm not entirely happy with it just yet. I think I'm going to write it longer then 12 minutes and then just cut it down for whatever I end up filming for class.
Let's change colours!
Cool. That's better. Ok. School will be back in soon. I have a film/video art project on Post-Modernism that is due soon. I am working with Charlene but we haven't actually done anything except telephone tag. I wish I had my pager but alas I do not.
Pretty soon I will be going back home for the summer. I hope I have a car, otherwise I will be borrowing the 'rent's car again like high school. I thought those days were past. I wish the AMC Eagle was still around. That thing was fun to 4x4. It had wood penal siding and it was a hatchback. What an ugly car.
It ruled. I saw one like it drive by only the tires were HUGE. I should have convinced dad to get tires that big.
Well things with the TGIFriday's girl didn't happen. I found out she HAS a boy so that is futile to attempt. At least I didn't confess my undying love and look like a fool.
Okay so I already look like a fool but I would have FELT like a fool, too.
At least I pretend to be oblivious to my foolishness and intend to keep it that way.
i need to really sit down and think about what I want to do with 'two chez' while I was trying to write it, a different story kept popping in my head. the other story takes place in a bar after hours with people that work there. I didn't want to write that one. I want to write Chez so I can SHAVE. Summer will be here soon. (yeah right) so my beard will make me sweat more.
I think I want to go to Europe this summer. I miss Rosanna. I want to see her. I think about taking off to Europe far too much. I should finish school and then worry about it. I think it will still be there, dependign on when I get out of school. Which reminds me, I have to register for classes next week.
GVSU is weird. you register for this spring, this summer, this fall and next winter at the same time. I don't REALLY know what I need to take next winter so I have to guess and hope i am right. How annoying! I am leaving you with my first draft of the first few Chez scenes. It doesn't have much in they way of wit or character development but hopefully it will soon.
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Ok. Here's what I'm working on right now. Don't show it to anyone!
Oh wait, it's on the internet. Shit.
Two
ChezTwo Chez - CharactersChez - Our Protagonist. He is jumpy, skeptical
and could show Mr. Pink a thing or two about being uptight.
Donald Hogan - British pop star. Arrogant son
of a bitch you wouldn't want to have to rely on.
Regan - token British pop star girlfriend. She
whines to get what she wants and drinks far too much tea.
Sly Casey - Mr. Hogans manager. Very sharp dressed,
quick-witted and pleasant to be around.
Men in Coats - They all wear long black trench
coats. They seem to speak in riddles. When they do speak plain English
you still don't know what they're talking about. They seem to be after
Chez for something. They come from the future. They from from your mind.
Truth is, no one really knows where they come or where they're going but
they sure drive fast.
Two Chez - Basic Run Down of Story
Today:
Chez is running down the sidewalk. Men are chasing
him. Running. Chasing. Running. Chasing. He arrives at the cafe. Regan
looks at him as he rushes by. He ducks behind the counter and finds his
way out the back door.
Months Earlier:
Chez is plotting something big. Big for him anyways.
Whatever it is upsets the Men. He gets back to his apartment to find it
trashed. He knows they didn't find anything because he does all his plotting
while at work and school so nothing of value to him exists at his apartment
except for a poster which gets bent up and THAT makes him mad. So The Men
take away the BritPop star thinking it's Chez and then the shit hits the
fan. What shit and what fan I'll let you know when I do!
Two Chez - Dialogue! (I am not fixing the formatting. Deal with it!)
EXT. CITY - DAY (SPRING 1998)
CHEZ is fleeing the Men in coats.SFX-Aksmamma 'running.' MAN1 barks
orders, while MAN2 screams into his cell-phone.
MAN2
"He's rounding Livernois, we
can get to him before the next
block,. we will rendezvous...
MAN1
Woodward. Tell them to meet
us at Woodward.
CHEZ
"Ooh, I shouldn't have ordered
two jamoca shakes.
MAN2
Sir, if I may interject, it would
seem highly illogical for us to
MAN1
I said Woodward, I didn't request
it.
MAN2
Yes, of course.
CHEZ
I hope hat's my stomach in pain, I
would hate to have my pancreas
taken out...
MAN2(into phone again)
We will meet you where Woodward
hits the Grand.
CHEZ
"C'mon legs, ow, ignore the
pain, ignore the pain.
A large truck rumbles through the street separating Chez and the Men.
Chez takes this moment to duck into a restaurant.
INT. RESTAURANT - MOMENTS LATER
WAITTRESS
Well hello. You look tired,
How many in your party?
CHEZ
Two if they catch me. None if
they don't.
WAITTRESS
Pardon me?
Chez pushes her aside as he runs to the back. He pauses to return a
stare from a customer and then comes to his senses and keeps moving.
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT (WINTER 1997)
GIRLFRIEND
Okay, Let me get this straight,
you want to...
CHEZ
No! Don't say it out loud, don't
EVER say it out loud. I'm sure
they are watching and listening
to me at any given time. There
is no safe place for us to talk
about it. I only told you so
you won't think I'm leaving you.
GIRLFRIEND
You're leaving me?
CHEZ
I won't be a part of your life for
the next few months. I want
you to realize this is for your
own safety. They could use
you to get to me. Think of it
as a nice mental vacation
from my antics.
GIRLFRIEND
Mental is more like it...
CHEZ
You'll get to spend some quality
time with yourself without being
bothered by me for once. Won't
that be nice?
GIRLFRIEND
When this is all over, we're going
to California and we're not coming
back until I'm ready.
CHEZ
Sounds great! I'll need time for
the heat to wear off anyways.
GIRLFRIEND
What exactly do you have
planned anyways?
CHEZ
Let's just compare it to stealing
the Fonz's bike and taking it
for a joy ride.
GIRLFRIEND
Well, Patzi, if that's what gets
you off...
SFX - Doorbell
CHEZ
Company? But I'm not in
the mood for unwanted
guests. I want a romantic
evening with my girl.
Chez gets up from the couch, looks through the eye hole. He quickly
turns around and returns to the couch.
CHEZ (to girlfriend)
Did you bring anything to stay overnight?
GIRLFRIEND
No. Actually everything I need is in the
car, I didn't bring it up.
CHEZ
Perfect!
Chez holds her as she talks, and walks her over to the fire escape.
GIRLFRIEND
What are you doing?
CHEZ
My 'friends' are over. They won't take to
kindly to your presence, and since
I don't want you hurt, it's fire drill time.
GIRLFRIEND
You are kidding me. What happened
to our romantic dinner and walk to
the hill at the park?
CHEZ
Sounds great! Let's have at it.
Chez opens the window, pushes her out. He grabs a bag from the couch
and follows her down the fire excape.
GIRLFRIEND
This is your idea of a romantic night?
CHEZ
You really don't go out with other
guys, do you?
GIRLFRIEND
What are you talking about?
She drops onto the top of a dumpster lid.
CHEZ
What is romance?
GIRLFRIEND
Flowers, notes, gifts, poetry
beautiful dinners with music
walks in the park...
CHEZ
Who DO you think you're dating?
GIRLFRIEND
I was wondering that myself
CHEZ
Romance is having fun
together. All those things
you mentioned are just
examples of fun couples
can have.
GIRLFRIEND
Oh. Running from killers
is fun?
CHEZ
Well think about it,
here we are, relying on
each other for our lives.
How exciting. I couldn't
think of a better way to
spend the night.
Chez drops off the fire excape. SFX - body landing in trash bin.
CHEZ
Oh, man!
GIRLFRIEND
I think you missed the lid, dear
CHEZ
(mocking her)
I think you missed the lid...
I KNOW THAT.
GIRLFRIEND
Now that you're sitting in a pile
of garbage, can you think of
a better way to spend the night?
MAN2
He's down there. He has an
accomplice.
CHEZ
Crap. They're on to us. Damn.
I hope they didn't get a good
look at you.
Chez climbs out of the disgusting dumpster. He steps into a mud puddle
Gross!
GIRLFRIEND
So it wasn't gross UNTIL
your foot got dirty.
CHEZ
Hey. I got a great idea. Let's
get away from these dullards
and THEN continue mocking
each other.
ok. that's it for now
Dan
March 6,1998